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Re: Lili Sam 17 Mai - 9:27
esiao
Donatello
You need to rework the dress the effect don't fit with the clean look of the rest imo.
The face seems a bit over-lighted or maybe that's because there's no shadows and the face seems flat and nose-less.
You should add a gradient on the bow tie to respect the shirt style.
Also with a dark atmosphere like this I think she must look kinda scared and no so neutral like right now.
The face seems a bit over-lighted or maybe that's because there's no shadows and the face seems flat and nose-less.
You should add a gradient on the bow tie to respect the shirt style.
Also with a dark atmosphere like this I think she must look kinda scared and no so neutral like right now.
3 Re: Lili Sam 17 Mai - 22:12
Shen
Petit Martien
Messages : 19Age : 28
Localisation : Argentina
Date d'inscription : 03/05/2014
La cara la noto demasiado clara y el menton se confunde c** el cuello, creo que un bg mas claro le vendría mejor. De todas formas se ve bastante bien nostra 
Hahahahaha me censura c-on
Hahahahaha me censura c-on
4 Re: Lili Dim 18 Mai - 3:48
nostradamius
Petit Martienthanks esiao ans shen I'll made a V2 of that c:
5 Re: Lili Sam 24 Mai - 20:56
nostradamius
Petit Martienits a v2 of the skirt Itry change the bg but I cant :c
6 Re: Lili Lun 26 Mai - 11:06
Juuka
Predator
Messages : 859Age : 24
Localisation : Somewhere, over the rainbow.
Date d'inscription : 27/02/2013
I think the skin on the face is too bright, and the hairs in the background are too angulars
It looks great anyway, good job !
(sorry for my bad english
)
It looks great anyway, good job !
(sorry for my bad english
) 
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